Listen to my story . . .

This took me so long to get it how i wanted, although it's nowhere near how i envisioned it...

So the background is fairly simple but i wanted the focus on Tidus.

Could really use some comments as to how to improve.

Thanks! Hope you like it

EDIT: i just thought i'd mention that i didn't trace or copy this picture. I used a few references for the features but the pose was original..

2ND EDIT: I'm replaying FFX as I type and can't understand the hatred towards Tidus, and even more so, the comparison with Cloud. Cloud was a soldier, trained and enhanced, Tidus was just a kid who played sports. Where is the comparison? Why are they in constant battle for superiority? It's like trying to compare Die hard with the neverending story D: I really like Tidus because he had an innocence that Cloud didn't, and as a character, personality-wise, was more fun. Their stories were completely different, as were their personality traits. You cannot compare the 2, they are completely different. Of course Cloud is going to be stronger, he is a trained and enhanced soldier! Although IMO, Tidus, if he were real, would deserve more accolades as he had just as much to deal with but had no special elite training or battle experience prior.